Tuesday, 29 January 2013
You've changed the course of history
And didn't even try
And didn't even try
- Ghost
N/A: I had a go at writing (somewhat of) an intro to a Gothic short story... I tried. ;___;
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“It had been several months since I’d been contacted by Mr Falden,
and I was beginning to feel anxious. I knew his work as foreman kept his busy,
but he was always able to find the time to write, and a letter would be
arriving at my door within weeks. I eventually succumbed to the decision of
paying him a visit. Was it that he simply forgot of my existence? Or is the
matter much more estranged than that? I’ve gathered necessary provisions for my
journey to Aldwater Keep, and should be there in 5 days.”
I looked up from re-reading
the letter I had written some days earlier; I’d been able to make it to
Fogswick, the village surrounding the inclination which the castle stands upon,
in just 3 days – though it was becoming dark and I knew I must make my way to
the keep soon, unless I wished to freeze to death. It seemed that luck resided
within me for the time being, but not upon the vacant village; the cold, eerie
silence was enough to tell me that. The centre of the establishment looked to
be an old marketplace, but it was obvious that it hadn’t been used for a
number of generations, as the wooden stalls and boxes were crumbling at the
touch, and materialised on the earth was a layer of white; at first glance it
appeared to be snow, but was fine and supple – my carriage-driver assured me
that it was the ash from a fire burned a great many years ago, though I’m not
sure I completely believe him. The houses, apart from the burst of white
staining their exteriors, were mostly greys made of smoothed, weathered stone,
with strokes of black grazing the walls in unfamiliar patches where the paint refused to be dislodged. I made my way from the village centre and into a cluster of
houses and, I noticed, as I peered through the grubby windows, a small candlelight shining in each of the houses, consisting of various sizes and luminosity. Curiosity overcoming me, I turn to my driver:
“How are the candles still
aglow if the village is deserted?”
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1 comments:
This is great!! You know I love a good gothic novel and you have got all the conventions in there! I love the description of the decaying market stalls and particularly love the name Fogswick!! More please...
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